Showing posts with label Recount.. Show all posts
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Thursday, May 28, 2020

Birthday with Friends - Recount.

Today we were learning how to use different sentence starters and more verbs.
I enjoyed thinking and writing about the topic I chose.
What I found challenging was trying to use verbs that made sense with the sentence.
My digital learning object shows I am getting better at using sentence starters that are different from the others.
Next time I  would change the topic and make the story longer.

Birthday with Friends!
Early morning with fog in the distance of the road, walking to the car with a trail of mist following on, Chatting and laughing with a group of friends. My stomach churns furiously in hunger of the crisp, crunchy popcorn awaiting to be eaten. The loud movie next door echoed whenever it made a sound. Clicking a fidgeting with the stuffed animal machine in eager to win a prize, Bickering over who gets to go first in the arcade. The long movie so funny and interesting, Trying not to laugh and disappoint other watchers. The sun was so hot and bright not allowing me to open my eyes.The long walk to McDonalds along with the present opening, The nicest lunch everyone was craving. Playing hide and seek being cramped up in a corner of a shop and very determined to win. The day ended by singing Happy Birthday.
28.05.20

Friday, May 22, 2020

Beach Day.

Today we were learning how to write recounts and try to use different sentence starters while writing.
I enjoyed making my plan and writing the whole story by doing something different.
What I found challenging was to try make some nice verbs that made sense.
My digital learning object shows I am getting better at using different sentence starters and juicy verbs.
Next time I would change the topic to a birthday or a holiday season.


Beach Day.
It was early lunchtime at the bitter, cold beach, Running, I was chatting on the crisp cold sticking sand. The scorching sun and the bitter, gentle wind whirled around my legs giving me goosebumps. People chatted, Barbeque’s sizzled sausages till they were scorching hot. Walking on the wet concrete road, Sand dropped off my soggy towel. 

On the way home, I saw mountain sceneries and busy bees collecting pollen from the vibrant, aromatic flowers.