Thursday, May 28, 2020

Birthday with Friends - Recount.

Today we were learning how to use different sentence starters and more verbs.
I enjoyed thinking and writing about the topic I chose.
What I found challenging was trying to use verbs that made sense with the sentence.
My digital learning object shows I am getting better at using sentence starters that are different from the others.
Next time I  would change the topic and make the story longer.

Birthday with Friends!
Early morning with fog in the distance of the road, walking to the car with a trail of mist following on, Chatting and laughing with a group of friends. My stomach churns furiously in hunger of the crisp, crunchy popcorn awaiting to be eaten. The loud movie next door echoed whenever it made a sound. Clicking a fidgeting with the stuffed animal machine in eager to win a prize, Bickering over who gets to go first in the arcade. The long movie so funny and interesting, Trying not to laugh and disappoint other watchers. The sun was so hot and bright not allowing me to open my eyes.The long walk to McDonalds along with the present opening, The nicest lunch everyone was craving. Playing hide and seek being cramped up in a corner of a shop and very determined to win. The day ended by singing Happy Birthday.
28.05.20

1 comment:

  1. Merhaba Manvi,
    Wow, an exciting birthday!
    When I did my recount I found it hard to think of a topic.
    Please visit my blog
    here
    Ma te wa
    Catalina

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