Wednesday, May 13, 2020

Mrs. Aperahama's Missing Sweets!

Mrs Aperahama discovers that a teacher has taken her prize stash of sweet treats! 


Clues
A witness claims to have seen a teacher dropping a pile of chocolate wrappers in the bin. 


Suspects
Miss Hickling
Mrs B

Miss McGuigan

Success Criteria:
1. Use detailed words and be specific. 😁😁😁
2. Make a picture in your reader's head. 😁😁

This all started during one day which was an amusement Friday or should I say Fri-YAY!?
But something suspicious has been going on in the staff room… Mrs. Aperahama has lost all of her chewy APPETIZING, MOUTHWATERING TREATS! The suspects are Miss Hickling, Mrs. B or Miss McGuigan!  
Let's start this story.. 
At morning tea, Mrs. Aperahama wanted some toffee’s.. She looks over and sees there's none in her little hole compartment!! She looks there.. There.. And there.. And here.. NOWHERE TO BE SEEN. Then she sees.. Wait who is that? Their back is turned.. MISS HICKLING! Mrs. Aperahama storms over to her as if she were a child who didn't wanna share her toy with someone else who stole it. “How could you?! YOU STOLE MY CANDY WHY MISS HICKLING WHY! I WAS WAITING TO EAT THOSE SINCE FOREVER!” “what.. But I just saw them on the counter?” She was acting suspicious because she wasn't leaving the bin until Mrs. Aperahama did. Mrs. Aperahama marched out the staff room and saw Manvi and Leyla around, She asked if they knew and THEY DID! Question by question by question by Mrs. Aperahama. Leyla said it wasn't Mrs. Hickling, Manvi said it wasn't Miss B….. MISS MCGUIGAN! We found the principal and questioned a whole heap. “Did you steal the treats!?” “Do you know who stole them?” blah blah blah even more questions followed by. Manvi and Leyla sneaked all the suspects when lunch was over, they knew they would get in a bit of trouble but… THEY NEED TO GET THOSE SWEET TREATS! Oh and the thief. They went into the haul and then it started pouring with rain, “Uhh this is kinda creepy.” said Mrs. B “Y-yeah it's so dark and c-c-cold..” said Mrs. Aperahama. “Well well, who's first?” “uh- … psst Leyla what do I say?” “Nothing! I'll do it agh..” “Okay.. well SORRY THAT I DON'T KNOW HOW TO BE A- UM UMM NEVERMIND!” Manvi then sooner stormed off and left it to Leyla. “WHO WAS IT! CONFESS YOURSELF NOW” Nobody answered but just looked at each other and laughed. Leyla lost it and stormed off to her class. The secret was.. All of the teachers were playing a prank on Mrs.Aperahama and till now she still doesn't know about it.. The teachers confessed with Mrs. Aperahama and all Mrs. Aperahama cared about was WHERE WAS THE CANDY!? So they lead Mrs. Aperahama entered Miss McGuigan’s office and there it was.. Everybody shrugged it off with an angry face, to a frown.. A smile AND A BIG LAUGH!
-By Manvi

1 comment:

  1. Hyvää päivää Manvi,
    We can't read your story because it runs off the page. Remember to use control<shift<v Then you can update your blog.
    Mā te wā,
    Mrs Naden

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