Friday, May 22, 2020

Beach Day.

Today we were learning how to write recounts and try to use different sentence starters while writing.
I enjoyed making my plan and writing the whole story by doing something different.
What I found challenging was to try make some nice verbs that made sense.
My digital learning object shows I am getting better at using different sentence starters and juicy verbs.
Next time I would change the topic to a birthday or a holiday season.


Beach Day.
It was early lunchtime at the bitter, cold beach, Running, I was chatting on the crisp cold sticking sand. The scorching sun and the bitter, gentle wind whirled around my legs giving me goosebumps. People chatted, Barbeque’s sizzled sausages till they were scorching hot. Walking on the wet concrete road, Sand dropped off my soggy towel. 

On the way home, I saw mountain sceneries and busy bees collecting pollen from the vibrant, aromatic flowers.


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