For our last activity we had to make a haiku poem about summer! I loved doing this because I like making poems, mainly about summer. A haiku poem is a poem with 3 lines, the first line, 5 syllables, middle line, 7 syllables, last line, 5 syllables.
I like making haiku poems because they are so easy and fun to make. My poem was based on summer and I got inspiration from a photo!
Here is what I made:
Kia Ora Manvi, Kiana again from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteTino pai! This is good! I really liked how you explained yourself in the introduction of this activity because it gave me some understanding behind the words you chose. “I remember the sea breeze” is a good line because i feel as though there are a few people who could relate to it, me being one. I live next to the beach so i tend to spend a lot of my summer time along the beach going for walks and swims and the breeze along the sea on a hot day is absolutely beautiful. What is your favorite thing about summer?
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Ngā mihi
Kiana-Marino
Kia Ora Kiana,
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I also love how the sea breeze just gushes across your face on a hot day! My favourite thing about summer is going out for nice walks and especially going out for a swim.
What do you like to do in summer?
Ma Te Wa,
Manvi.
Kia Ora Manvi
ReplyDeleteI really like your haiku poem.
I learnt that you remember the summer breeze
Ma te Wa,
Kylah
Kia Ora Kylah,
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I hope your having a good holiday.
Did you enjoy making a haiku poem?
Ma Te Wa,
Manvi