Tuesday, January 5, 2021

Summer Sounds Poem - Summer Learning Journey Day 16.

 Today for our 1st activity we had to make a poem about Summer sounds and add a video of us recording the noises we hear. I enjoyed this activity because I like to write poems and I love Summer. I found nothing hard about this activity expect choosing what would go next in my poem because I couldn't think of anything to write! We first had to read a poem for inspiration.

In my video the main things that I heard were birds chirping, the wind flowing by and trees rustling. Tell me what you hear! What do you hear outside of your house? Do you have any native birds that you hear near your house? If so, what type of bird do you think it is? 

Here are my google slides for this activity: 

3 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Manvi,

    My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.

    I really enjoyed this poetry activity as I love reading and writing poems and summer is my favourite season!

    I think you did an awesome job introducing the activity and explaining what you enjoyed and found difficult. I think your poem is awesome, you stuck to the summer theme well and you had a couple rhyming words in there.

    Unfortunately I am unable to view the sounds in the slide so could you please share the files
    Anyone on the internet with this link can view so everyone can see it on your blog.

    Happy Holidays, Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.

    Ngā mihi nui,
    Zana Yates

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    1. Kia Ora Zana,
      Thank you for commenting on my blog.
      I also love summer too! And yes, I have updated my blog so anyone can see the video, hope you can view it now. What do you do in the Summer? What do you like about Summer?
      Ma Te Wa,
      Manvi.

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  2. Mōrena Manvi

    Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey Team, here. You should have received an email requesting to give me permission to access the file you have uploaded in this post as I am not currently able to do so (and neither is anyone else visiting your blog).

    Could you please grant me access? Thank you - I am really looking forward to listening to your recording.

    Mā te wā
    Shannon (SLJ)

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